February 2nd, 2004 -- by Bacchus
Flunking Basic Anatomy
So I was reading this entertaining and erudite discussion of literary rejection slips and the joys of slushpile reading, when a fellow with experience reading the slushpile for an an erotic fiction publisher recalled coming over this appalling gem of bad dirty prose:
“Then he parted the twin nodes of her clitoris…”
Ouchies.
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ouch indeed. the infinite minkeys were working late on that one, no doubt.
Yikes. Not the kind of split ANYONE is looking for.
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