Comments on: Summer Sex

By: The English Courtesan

The English Courtesan — Sun, 27 Aug 2006 00:42:19 +0000

I think the writing style actually adds something to the post here - it’s excited and exciting and I certainly found it an arousing read. Thank you for sharing Desireous and I very much look forward to the next installment.

Regarding moderation, oooh, Bacchus, I need to be moderated too! Might you oblige? Bends over… ;-)

Livvy

By: joel

joel — Fri, 25 Aug 2006 05:11:03 +0000

[sniping at another commenter deleted -- Bacchus]

And Des, i found your script quite sexy. Didn’t even notice the alleged issues of spelling, and thats somewhat my job in the real world.

By: Bacchus

Bacchus — Wed, 23 Aug 2006 19:30:38 +0000

Don’t worry Des, I don’t mind you responding — it’s just that if I’d been on the ball, you never would have seen them in the first place.

By: Desireous

Desireous — Wed, 23 Aug 2006 18:42:37 +0000

Sorry for responding to those comments Bacchus. I was having a bad day! Sometimes you just get tired of people trying to drag you down for no good reason. I should have restrained myself and not declared war against them here on your blog. Hope you forgive me.

hugs
Des

By: Vance

Vance — Tue, 22 Aug 2006 13:14:12 +0000

I liked this little piece. It reminded me of a similar event when I was in college. I was walking a co-worker home one night and we cut through a park. We ended up making out and I got a blowjob sitting on a picnic table while she sat on the bench.

By: Bacchus

Bacchus — Sat, 19 Aug 2006 23:30:41 +0000

Grrr. I’ve been offline or I would have moderated the hell out of this thread.

I typically don’t allow negative comments about writing style in my comments — ErosBlog is not an online writer’s workshop. And I definately don’t allow folks to play the “writes like a man” game with folks who choose to present themselves as female sex bloggers. All such comments would have been deleted, if I’d seen them before they were responded to.

Play nice or get moderated, it’s that simple.

By: Melody

Melody — Sat, 19 Aug 2006 04:51:38 +0000

I disagree with Einmaliger. I am a girl and I would definately speak that way about a man’s penis.

By: Tantalus

Tantalus — Sat, 19 Aug 2006 00:54:21 +0000

well don’t i feel like an ass. after my little remark about the grammar being incorrect i have discovered my own little feau-pau.
“i made noticed the english bit”
…how very astute of me…

By: Desireous

Desireous — Fri, 18 Aug 2006 23:06:03 +0000

Well your comment Tantalus came on top of two e-mails that I received just this morning from someone who felt it necessary to point out my English mistakes and they were very very rude about it. I don’t understand why people have to be so nasty. So when I read your comment I pretty much hit the roof. I don’t get paid to do this. It’s a hobby. I do it for pleasure and I don’t have the time to edit. I am aware that there are many English and spelling mistakes but truthfully I don’t have the time to fine tune it the way that some people might. I’m a single working mother and I’m very busy with the real world. I think my blog is a good value, considering the cost and all. ;-)

hugs
Des

By: Libby

Libby — Fri, 18 Aug 2006 22:47:34 +0000

I really, really love sucking cock as well Desireous! I thought your description of this passion to be very accurate, if also a bit rough.

But really, who doesn’t love it a little rough sometimes?