Internet Sex Writing (Or: “My White Hot Concrete Erection”)
Here at ErosBlog the “Thumper Principle” features among our editorial guidelines — when it comes to the artistic strivings of others, especially non-commercial others, “if you can’t say something nice, don’t say nuthin’ at all.”
This is usually easy to live up to; although snark is often fun, for the most part I prefer to link to good stuff, or to stay silent.
But, as is well known, internet sex writing sometimes transcends the mere “bad” — of which little need or ought be said — and assumes a special glory by express virtue of its enthusiastic divergence from the restrained norms of narrative fiction. In such cases, special exceptions to the Thumper Rule can, and indeed must, be made. (Although there’s no need to be unduly mean about it.)
Onward! The following excerpt comes from a much longer bit of spanking prose entitled Naked Spanking Breaks by “PrinceOfHearts”. I believe the traditional “beverage warning” should now be applied, for the protection of your keyboard and nasal passages:
She was locked into a perfect all-fours mounting posture, and it was the ideal moment to consider my own ejaculatory pleasure. I always like to tailor this final humiliation to the filly under the whip, and most often I would say to Jenny:
“Right then, girl. I think I’ve made my point. Time for a deep, thumping shag up the bottom.”
When I take ownership of a female, one of the most important things is to discover her deepest physical weakness so that I can enjoy ruthlessly and ingeniously exploiting it, reducing her to a quivering jelly of broken disgrace with minimum expenditure of effort.
Jenny’s little secret fulcrum of devastating shame was her sweet, tight little asshole. One of the most embarrassing things for her about having her knickers taken down was the thought that I could see and even touch this forbidden place. She could hardly endure having her bud tweaked, so private and sensitive was that little opening, and the painful indignity of having foreign objects pushed up it was too much for her to bear without crying out in shame.
Of course it was therefore with the greatest of dominant, masculine pleasure that I would celebrate the end of a particularly exciting punishment session by forcing my white hot, concrete erection up her back passage one excruciating inch at a time.
She would wet herself with mortified excitement at even the very mention of anal sex, so I took great delight in the look of deep terror in her wide and pretty eyes when I would grin and say:
“Right then, lets get this massive hard-on as far up your bottom as we can, shall we?”
Link via Spanking Blog.
Shorter URL for sharing: https://www.erosblog.com/?p=3056
*blinks* If you upset the Godfather of the Internet mafia, does he dip your cock into concrete to teach you a lesson?
precious !
some light editing .. and voila
When I take ownership of a female, one of the most important things is to discover her deepest physical weakness so that I can enjoy ruthlessly and ingeniously exploiting it, reducing her to a quivering jelly of broken disgrace with minimum expenditure of effort.
Jenny’s little secret fulcrum of devastating shame were her eyebrows. Plucked, shaped, they never quite matched and Jenny knew that I knew that others knew. Eyebrows. Jenny’s fulcrum. Of devasting shame.
She sobbed as I pulled the esthetician’s chair to her bound, displayed self. The nitrile latex snapping against my wrist brought a gasp. Her musk mixed with the smell of melted wax which made sitting comfortably impossible. But I am a professional.
[and so forth]
He forgot to mention that this happened “on a dark and stormy night”. ;)
Oh uh huh. I like it. Very good.
“Secret fulcrum of devastating shame”, oh, that’s rich! We ought to encourage this writer, there is far too little humour in smut.
omg… I actually kind of liked that, and I’m so not gonna tell my therapist about it, which, oh, oh god, the horror.
Gives a whole new meaning to masturbatory prose, eh?
I kept giggling as I read it, but at the end of it I noticed I’d gotten rather hard in spite of the amusing verbiage. What can I say, buttsex turns me on.
Re:
“Right then, lets get this massive hard-on as far up your bottom as we can, shall we?”
I’m sorry, but when I read this, I could barely get past the polite grammar and syntactic structure… I couldn’t help but picture British actor Hugh Grant with Hollywood prostitute Divine Brown… …or maybe Sir Roger Moore as James Bond with actress and Bond gal Jane Seymour… Not that that’s a bad thing… just that who really talks that way when they are having sex? I guess my Yankee roots are showing… I mean, I really can’t hear myself seriously saying: “Right then, let’s aim our urine flow a wee bit more to the left now shall we? That’s a girl! Now hold steady and think of England…”
Dr Whiplash, I can promise you no Brits talk like that either.
Dr. Whiplash,
If I hadn’t watched Bridge over the River Kwai yesterday, I MIGHT not have just done that spit take.
Thanks.
:-D