Summer Sex
Summer picnics in the park, blowjobs on the picnic tables, what could be more summery than that?
Sir and I met up after work. We drove to one of favorite parks since parks are pretty much all we have right now till summers over. It was a nice night to be outside. It was hot and humid but it was comfortable at the park near the water.
We sat on the bench together and started kissing. Our kisses grew more and more passionate. My whole body surged with excitement as I could feel Sir’s passionate burning desire for me there in his kiss.
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Anyway back to that burning passionate kissing that left me a melting dripping slut. We kissed like that for a good while and then I just couldn’t take it anymore. I had to have some cock. I reached down and felt the stiff pole through his shorts. God it was hard! God I wanted it. We got his pants unfastened and I held his cock in my hand. “Do you want to go over on the picnic table?” He asked. “Yeah, that would be nice.” I answered. Then I added, “Come on hurry up! I want to suck that cock!” He laughed at me and we walked up to the picnic table. He sat up on the table. I sat on the bench and opened my mouth and took in that nice hard delicious cock and sucked it hard. Mmm, my lover has one tasty cock! I felt that steel like shaft with the silky smooth skin sliding across my tongue as the swollen head worked its way into my throat. Oh how I love to have a mouthful of cock! It’s the best!
From Desireous.
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sounds like it’s two different writers. the first paragraph sounds like it was written by someone who doesnt know english very well, her syntax was off. however the second paragraph was very well written.
just an observation
I don’t know if it was written by a man or a woman, but it was certainly written to turn on men, it did me anyway.
I wonder why you commenters have to be so mean. First of all to hell with my English. I was horny remmebering the event. So what?!!! If you read that and could only concentrate on my English then you seriously have a problem. Are you really that uptight? Cause I’ve got a big dildo to use on you that would probalby really loosen you up quite a bit. And as for being a man. I am really tired of being accused of being a man just because I love to suck cock. Why do you people have such a problem with that?!!!!!!!!
Actually the whole article doesn’t sound like it was written by a woman. More like a man would like a woman to think.
Grammar, syntax…what are we ON about here?
As to it being written by a man; I know of more than one female who loves to suck cock. Having had recently enjoyed sucking some myself, I can vouch for the delicious feelings that that activity provides.
A summer story well told. The point came across just fine.
Everyone knows that grammar is for winter time stories!
Well your comment Tantalus came on top of two e-mails that I received just this morning from someone who felt it necessary to point out my English mistakes and they were very very rude about it. I don’t understand why people have to be so nasty. So when I read your comment I pretty much hit the roof. I don’t get paid to do this. It’s a hobby. I do it for pleasure and I don’t have the time to edit. I am aware that there are many English and spelling mistakes but truthfully I don’t have the time to fine tune it the way that some people might. I’m a single working mother and I’m very busy with the real world. I think my blog is a good value, considering the cost and all. ;-)
hugs
Des
Darlin’ it seems that you missed the second part of my primary comment.
I do seem to remember myself saying the second part was very well written. I very much enjoyed the entire bit, i just was trying to imagine the writer. i made noticed the english bit and commented on it because i was imagining a european accent with the first paragraph.
as for your love of sucking cock, i must say i completely disagree with einmaliger. it didnt sound at all like a man wrote it. if a man had written it the whole bit about the kissing would have been left out.
I do apologize if i have offended you darlin’ so if you could, spare the dildo and spoil the idiot.
I agree with the author. Some people are soooo uptight.Who gives a heck about her english and I can’t believe someone would analized like that and then whomever took the time to even write about their “analysis”! What a joke
I really, really love sucking cock as well Desireous! I thought your description of this passion to be very accurate, if also a bit rough.
But really, who doesn’t love it a little rough sometimes?
well don’t i feel like an ass. after my little remark about the grammar being incorrect i have discovered my own little feau-pau.
“i made noticed the english bit”
…how very astute of me…
I disagree with Einmaliger. I am a girl and I would definately speak that way about a man’s penis.
Grrr. I’ve been offline or I would have moderated the hell out of this thread.
I typically don’t allow negative comments about writing style in my comments — ErosBlog is not an online writer’s workshop. And I definately don’t allow folks to play the “writes like a man” game with folks who choose to present themselves as female sex bloggers. All such comments would have been deleted, if I’d seen them before they were responded to.
Play nice or get moderated, it’s that simple.
I liked this little piece. It reminded me of a similar event when I was in college. I was walking a co-worker home one night and we cut through a park. We ended up making out and I got a blowjob sitting on a picnic table while she sat on the bench.
Sorry for responding to those comments Bacchus. I was having a bad day! Sometimes you just get tired of people trying to drag you down for no good reason. I should have restrained myself and not declared war against them here on your blog. Hope you forgive me.
hugs
Des
Don’t worry Des, I don’t mind you responding — it’s just that if I’d been on the ball, you never would have seen them in the first place.
[sniping at another commenter deleted — Bacchus]
And Des, i found your script quite sexy. Didn’t even notice the alleged issues of spelling, and thats somewhat my job in the real world.
I think the writing style actually adds something to the post here – it’s excited and exciting and I certainly found it an arousing read. Thank you for sharing Desireous and I very much look forward to the next installment.
Regarding moderation, oooh, Bacchus, I need to be moderated too! Might you oblige? Bends over… ;-)
Livvy